1. This was the first story of the trilogy not to include Chris or his wife
2. There was an entire deleted scenario in the story which had a much more inappropriate storyline.
3. Initially, there was a thought to include children in this story as well who would have played in a bouncy castle I had set up for children.
4. There were multiple factors that lead to the deletion of this storyline including one where the children would have snuck out in the middle of the night to play in the bouncy castle.
5. Another reason for children not being involved in the storyline was because it was meant to have a sexual aspect to it. In the end, a dialed down version of the sexual aspect was included in the story but without the involvement of children.
6. The ending to the story was up in the air until the very last minute when mom’s involvement was included citing my original belief that mom could do anything better than a cop.
7. It also ties into something mom once said to me, that if I ever got in trouble with the police, it would be her I should be afraid of and not them. She also said that anything police would do to reprimand me would pale in comparison to what she would do.

8. In the original story pitch, one of mom’s friend’s daughters was originally supposed to be involved in the deleted part.

9. This would have prompted her mother to claim she was missing and thereby would have brought upon mom’s motivation to look into the party.

10. She would have arrived to hear her friend scream at the things I was telling her daughter and was supposed to climb the roof into the bedroom and knock me out before any harm was done.

11. Originally, my stepfather who would have been unable to sleep would have been watching the news as the party was broadcast. This would have been how mom initially finds out about it.

12. The original ending would have seen a crowd of angry parents whose children had snuck out to play in the bouncy castle swarm my house, assault me and destroy my house. This would have been without the involvement of mom.

13. It was thought that mom would have found out about this weeks later and would have indeed ended my association with Megan as a result citing my inability to be unable to control myself.

14. The original script has us getting intimate in the same room as the bouncy castle with the kids exclaiming that it looks like more fun to bounce where we were bouncing then where they were.

15. This was what caused me to change the script….my inability to tone the script down into some more appropriate especially since the kids would have seen something they shouldn’t have already.

16. It’s believed that mom would not have approved of reading the original script and would have even gotten mad at me (rightfully so,) just for my frame of mind. This would have been made worse given the fact that it involved one of mom’s friend’s children.

17. I have a good enough relationship with this friend of hers but in the end of the original script, she tells me off, (with good reason,) and no longer regards me as a good person.

18. There were originally more swear words and a lot more violence.

19. For the entirety of the party, Megan and I are originally making out with her standing guard of the front door to stop people from coming in while we do so.

20. This story is based off the movie “Project X” which itself depicts an out of control party that cops cannot contain.